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All I learned about writing resume, I learned in Marketing

In June 2001, I was rudely awakened to a new, unsympathetic job market.  The start-up I worked for ran out of money and suddenly, I found myself turning from a dot com millionaire wannabe to an anxious, stressed-out recipient of the government unemployment checks. 

Of course, I was not alone.  More than two and half millions Americans were laid off last year.  Silicon Valley was hit harder than most regions, with unemployment rates higher than the national averages.  Initially, I was not optimistic about my chances of finding new employment quickly.  There simply were too many unemployed or recently laid off people with similar skill sets and experience competing for too few open jobs.

Fortunately, I soon realized that the employment picture I faced was very similar to the many marketing challenges I dealt with before.  The problem is the same, i.e., how do you build a market leading position with products that are at parity to those of the competition?  Though I had diligently gone through the many resume books that I accumulated over the years, I found the advices and methods these books offered wanting.  None provided a clear strategy to achieve differentiation, the key to winning for marketers.

Did I just say “differentiation”?  I knew this concept very well from my years of working as a marketer for Procter & Gamble, a venerable consumer products giant and a favorite “case study” company for many business schools.  Drawing from the experience, I systematically applied the marketing lessons to the “dull” and “unexciting” task of writing my resume.

How well did this “experiment” work?  It turned out much better than anything else I tried before.  Within four weeks of sending out my “marketing” resume, I received six callbacks and interviews with five different companies.  I eventually had two offers and accepted one from an Internet company in Mountain View.  This result was not remarkable if it happened during the boom time of Silicon Valley.  Instead, it occurred right at the time where the unemployment rates here were near all time highs and news of lay offs came out daily.

Well, enough for my sales pitch.  Shall we go through what the marketing lessons are and how to apply them to writing resume?

Identify your target customers - Who are the gatekeepers?

This first step is critically important, but often overlooked by most job seekers.  Job seekers commonly assume that the hiring managers will be the only people who read their resumes.  The resume writers, then, failed to ask the question “Who are the gate keepers before my resume get to the hiring managers?”

Failing to ask this question, most job seekers never knew what their odds are and why they never receive the call back they expected.  Indeed, the odds are not good and keep getting worse.  For every “real” job that is posted, several hundred to thousand of resumes come in, burying the poor souls that have to wade through them.  Depending on whom you talk to, the odds could range from 1:100 to 1:1000 or more. 

The answer to the question “Who are the gate keepers” is not difficult to find.  Your favorite human resources manager, recruiters, or outplacement consultants can tell you that they are:

human resources managers,

administrative assistants,

executive recruiters, or

scanning machines

It is easy to miss and dismiss the last category of “gate keepers”, the “scanning machines or software” as inanimate, dumb tools that cannot possibly perceive the sterling qualities of your resume.  Whatever your feelings toward these tools may be, dismissing them is a big mistake.  Instead, your job search would be much more productive (and possibly much less painful), if you give them a human dimension.  Ask the question “How would I program the scanning machines if I want to screen the hundred or thousand of resumes that do not meet the requirements for the job?”

Understand your target customers and their needs

After identifying the gate keepers, the next step is to understand how they approach their job and what their key needs are.  Again, with a little research, you can easily find the answers to these questions.

I found a good articulation on how gate keepers think in a wonderful article, “Skeptical Resume Reader Tells How He Really Thinks” by Douglas B. Richardson on CareerJournal.com.  Below are two paragraphs from the article that will give you a flavor.

“As a human-resources consultant, I spend a lot of time making judgments about people on the basis of how they present themselves in resumes. In this role, my highest priorities are to cull the few from the many and help my clients avoid pigs in pokes. My job description doesn't include extending charity to job seekers and resume writers. On the contrary, I find I approach every resume with a certain impatient cynicism.

Far too many resumes reflect a naive belief that each and every word will be read by a Rational Reader. Rational Readers are marked by receptive hearts, detached egos, and lots of free time. They are more rare than unicorns. I certainly have never met one.”

Once you set the objective of understanding who the “gate keepers” and what their needs are, there are numerous way of finding the answer.  For a start, you can ask your favorite executive recruiters for advices on the subject.  Most good executive recruiters are more than happy to share with you their frustration if you show a little empathy or curiosity.  Another way is to search the Internet or browse books in your favorite libraries or bookstores.  Perhaps, the simplest way is to befriend the human resources manager or recruiter in your own current company and ask them about their work.  Whatever methods you choose, by doing some homework, you will eventually arrive at the following learning:

1.            Resume readers:

Must quickly screen out resumes that do not meet the qualifications for the job

Often spend no more than 3 seconds scanning a resume and making the decision whether to read any further or toss it into the trash can

Often have only the job requisition document from the hiring managers to form the criteria to screen out or screen in candidates

Read far too many poorly written resumes and can tell if your resume is a bad one (and thus a quick toss to the trash can) faster than you can say “hello” (To determine how good your resume is, see the grading scale and check list for resume that I provide at the end of this article.)

Will appreciate you and give your resume much better consideration if your resume somehow makes it easy to find the information they need to make their decision.  Said another way, your resume should not “waste” their time.

2.            Resume readers’ needs are:

To minimize the mistakes of screening in unqualified or poor candidates

Help from any where to do their job quickly and efficiently

To look like a star to their bosses

3.         As a corollary of learning # 1 above, the job requisitions provide the job seekers with a wealth of information on the gate keepers’ screening criteria.  Specifically, most common screening criteria are:

A specific type of professionals

Years of relevant experience

Experience in specific industries

Portfolio of skills

Present your product (yourself) as the solution to your customers’ needs

With the learning above, you are now ready to make yourself look like the solution to the gate keepers’ needs.  The key is to provide the readers with the exact information they are looking for.  Correspondingly, don’t clutter the resume or distract the readers’ attention with information they don’t care about.

So, what is the information that resume screeners really don’t care for?  Most often, it is the “Objective” section that so many job seekers feel compelled to put at the top of their resumes.  Generally, getting rid of the “Objective” section is a good idea because:

Most companies today don’t care what your career objectives are.  Rather, they care about what skills you bring to the job.  Said another way, employers care about what you can do for them, not what they will do for you!

The poor souls that have to screen your resume care even less about your career objectives.  Remember their key focus is to decide whether or not you are a qualified candidate.

The “Objective” section can only hurt you.  If your objective aligns with what the hiring manager has in mind for the employee in this position, you really don’t score any points.  No employer will hire you only because what you want to do is aligned with what they want to do.  If your objective does not align, it is an easy reason to dismiss you as a viable candidate.

The Objective section takes up the most valuable real estate on your resume, the very top part of the first page, where most resume readers are likely to read in that critical first 3 seconds.  This valuable location is much better used to provide the answers to the resume readers’ screening criteria.

The next obvious question is “How do I provide these answers?”  A “Summary” or “Profile” section at the top of the resume will do nicely.  A well-written “Summary” provides readers with answers to the following questions:

 What kind of professionals are you?  In marketing lingo, this question is phrased as “How do you position yourself?”  The more specific you can be with the positioning (and align it with the job title of the position you are applying for), the better.

For example, a candidate may have had experience in product marketing, marketing communication, consulting, and brand management.  When applying for a position in product management with a technology company, the best positioning in this case would probably be “product management professional” or “product marketing professional”.

How many years of experience do you have?  Providing the answer to this question upfront may put you in good graces with the readers.  Remember that these readers must sort through thousands of resumes to pick a few.  Then, you can easily understand why they don’t want to flip through your resume and do the math to figure out how many years of experience you actually have.

What industries did you work in before?  Many companies will only hire candidates from within their industries.  Others will be more open-minded and willing to consider candidates from other industries.  However, all employers need to make a quick judgment on whether the skills you bring are relevant and transferable.  You are much better off to help the resume readers to answer this question rather than trying to hide it.  They will look for the answer any way.  If it is too hard to find the answer, it is easy for the reader to toss your resume into the trash can, and look at the next one.

What skills do you bring to the job?  Every job requires a certain skill set.  In fact, the skill set required for any job is almost always listed in the job description.  By listing the skills you have that match the job requirements here, you make it easy for the resume reader to determine that you are indeed a viable candidate.  Also, the savvy resume writers will list their skills using the same words in the job requisition.  This approach not only makes it easy to read for the human readers, but also will help you pass the resume scanning machines.

If you have worked in the software industry, you probably will find the approach I describe above very similar to the concept of “usability”.  Indeed, it is nothing more than “usability” applied to resume writing.  Except, in writing, the concept is probably better named as “readability”!

Deliver “Convincing Reasons To Believe”

During the Internet boom, employers often encountered difficulty in hiring employees.  It was so easy for most people to find job that the joke “the breath test” became very popular.  The joke was “If you are breathing and want a job, you will get one.”  The joke wasn’t very far from the mark.  Good time as it was, the boom had also lulled many job seekers into a false sense of security and dulled their job searching skills.

In this economic down turn, the employment picture changes completely.  Employers now can afford to be very choosy about whom they hire.  As such, they no longer just ask “Do you have the skills to do the job?”  Most employers now will ask the additional question “How good are your skills?”  Whereas before job seekers often only have to answer this question during the interview, today they have to provide the answers on their resumes.  If they don’t, their chances of getting the interview are slim.

Despite these changes, many job seekers still write their resume using the old formats of the 80’s and 90’s.  They simply took out their old resumes, updated them with the experiences of their latest jobs, and considered their resume “perfect” and “finished”. 

What these job seekers don’t realize is that their resumes read like a “specification sheet”, not a “selling, marketing document”.  As “spec sheet”, these resumes merely list the job descriptions and experiences in the candidates’ past jobs.  The resumes therefore only answer the question “Do you have the skills to do the job?”  They fail to answer the question “How good are your skills?”  As my old colleagues at Procter & Gamble would put it, these resumes fail to give the buyer, i.e., the employer, “Convincing Reasons To Believe”.

To effectively market the product, i.e. you, your resume must provide the ultimate human readers ample evidences that you are indeed very good at what you do.  Providing these “Convincing Reasons To Believe” is how you can differentiate yourself from the hundreds or thousands of other candidates competing for the same job. 

How do you effectively present these “Convincing Reasons To Believe”?  The most effective way I have learned is to write every bullet point in every job I ever had as an accomplishment, and not merely as a job description.

An accomplishment, as I learned at a P&G interviewing training course many years ago, consisted of three components called CAR:

Context: This component provides answer to the question “What was the business problem you were trying to solve?”

Action: This part answers the question “What did you do to solve the problem?”

Results: This component is the critical piece that differentiates an accomplishment from a mere job description.  It provides the specific business results for the action you took to solve the business problem at hand.  The results answer the “So what?” question for a hiring manager.  “So what does it matter?  Why should I as a resume reader care that you did something?”  The business results are the piece that gives hiring managers the “Convincing Reasons To Believe” that if you have delivered for previous employers, you can and will do the same for them.

An example of an accomplishment that meets the CAR criteria is shown below:

“Analyzed the return on investment for all promotions ran by Brand X during fiscal year 1992-1993.  Recommended and gained management agreement to discontinue promotion Y, an ineffective coupon program.  The discontinuation saved the brand $4 million in marketing spending.”

By now, it should be obvious that unlike a job description, an accomplishment not only tells what you did, but also how well you did it.  It tells the complete story and gives the reader a sense of your track record as a business contributor to employers you worked for previously.

In the hundreds of resumes that I have seen as an interviewer for many companies over the past ten years, more than 95% contain little or no business results that will raise the interest of a reader.  Of the few that did, none achieved the “perfect” state of having every bullet point as a complete accomplishment.  If your resume can achieve this state, then you will achieve the ultimate “differentiation” that all marketers seek.

Execute with Excellence

An important lesson that marketers learned time and again is that a successful marketing campaign requires both the right strategy and excellent execution.  Writing a resume is planning and executing a personal marketing campaign.  All the hard work that you put into planning, i.e., identifying the target audience, understanding their needs, presenting yourself as the solutions, and finding the convincing reasons to believe, may still go to waste if you don’t write every sentence in the resume with utmost consideration and care.

“Of course I always write my resume with utmost attention and care,” you may protest!  Yes, but a fresh set of eyes (meaning not yours nor your close friends’) will always pick out the one or two mistakes that somehow escape your attention.  Of the hundreds of resumes that I’ve reviewed over the year (several rewrites of mine included), I haven’t seen one that I couldn’t pick out at least one thing that wasn’t quite right.  Below is a list of the common errors that I have seen in these resumes:

Not enough context:  Most resume writers list only the names and locations of companies they worked for.  Implicitly, they assume that the readers ought to know what these companies are and what they do.  Well, that may be the case if the company they worked for is General Electric or Citibank, but not if it is Startup.com, which went out of business six months ago.  In fact, most Americans can’t tell the difference between the companies Cisco and Sysco.  The reality is most resume readers don’t know anything about the companies you worked for if all they have are just a name.  A short sentence providing the pertinent information about the company (its size, line of business, focus) will provide the much-needed context for the resume readers to assess your skills and the environments where you learned these skills.

Inconsistency: There are two types of inconsistency that many resumes suffer from:

o        Logical Inconsistency: The bullet points in the body of the resume do not adequately support the skills or experience the writer claims to possess in the summary section.

o        Writing style inconsistency: Unlike writing a novel, a consistent, simple sentence structure works best for resume.  Almost every sentence in a resume could be written to start with an action verb.  By maintaining the discipline to start every sentence with a strong action verb, you can convey to the readers that you are a focused, action-oriented individual.  If you go away from this approach just for the sake of having variety, you may end up with many weak sentences that either confuse the readers or make it difficult for the readers to figure out exactly what did you do.  Worse, it could convey an impression that you are a better talker than a doer.

Where is the action? This is a continuation of the point above.  Ultimately, the employer will hire you because of what you can do, not because you were a member of a project team on a major project in your previous company.  As such, every sentence in every bullet point of your resume should strive to tell your specific contributions to your previous employers.  The best way to convey this message is to begin every sentence with a strong action verb.

Uses of superfluous adjectives and adverbs: Many resume writers carry the naďve belief that they can better describe how good and brilliant they are if they use big, important sounding adjectives or adverbs to spice up their accomplishments.  As such, they liberally use words and phrases like “very”, “progressive”, “excellent”, “great”, “outstanding”, or “strategic focused”.  They don’t realize that these words really don’t add any meaning to their sentences.  They don’t provide any “convincingness” to persuade a skeptical resume reader.  The best proofs of your abilities are the business results of what you did, expressed in clear metrics, not superfluous adjectives or adverbs.

In fact, experienced resume readers will most likely discount these adjectives or adverbs.  They won’t even see these words.  If they do, they will count them as a negative, not a positive.

English only please!  Throughout your professional career, you would undoubtedly have picked up many industry or company’s jargons.  Keep in mind that while these jargons may have clear meanings to you or your former colleagues, they mean absolutely nothing to the rest of the world, including 99% of the people who will screen your resume.  As such, you will be doing yourself a big favor by avoiding the temptation to use these jargons in your resume.

Your resume will receive a much more favorable impression from the people who read them if you strive to make every sentence understandable for people who know nothing about what you did before.  Following some common sense rules of thumb below should allow you to achieve this objective:

Don’t use any company or industry specific jargon.  If you have to use them, at least attempt to explain what they mean in clear English.

Avoid using any abbreviations, particularly for industry or company specific products, projects or services.  If you must use an abbreviation, at least spell it out the first time.

Avoid using any symbols (scientific or mathematical) in your resume.

Keep your sentence short and simple:  Many resume writers seem to operate under the assumption that you can only write one sentence per each bullet point.  This assumption then becomes their excuse to pack as many unrelated ideas into a sentence as possible.  The results are long, incomprehensible sentences that run several lines long. 

The reality is that if a reader cannot understand your sentence with a quick scan, he won’t bother reading it.  I know this from personal experience.  In screening candidates for my previous companies, I usually quickly discard resumes that I found to have too many long, incomprehensible sentences.  After all, if you didn’t bother to make your resume understandable for me, then why should I give you the courtesy to give it any consideration?

Again, following the simple rules of thumb below will enable you to avoid making this mistake:

Don’t write any sentence that is more than two lines long.

Don’t try to combine unrelated ideas into a single sentence.

Don’t try to use more than one prepositional phrase per sentence.

Make sure that the subject of any sentence is clear.  Most sentences in a resume will have the implied subject “I”.  If the subject of a sentence is not an implied “I”, then be sure to clearly write it out.

Good Hunting!

Writing a resume is not rocket science.  However, by now, it should be clear to you that writing a good resume is not as simple as copying the format everyone else uses and sprinkle in a few big adjectives here and there.

By following the proven marketing principles outlined in this article, you will greatly improve your chances of getting your resume actually read and given due consideration.  Applying these principles to your resume will take much more thinking and hard work.  The reward is that you can much better differentiate yourself from the other thousand of candidates with similar skills.  See in this light, the reward is well worth the investment.

Good luck and good job hunting!

Copyright 2002

Trinh Do

May 2002

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